Please refer to WWF just as WWF, since we have two different names. ...Somewhere I'd like a stronger sentence/reference to possibly biodiversity, wildlife or species loss. As far as I can see, it only gets a very vague mention " ...consequences...natural ecosystems...are large" in the first para on the second page. I'd like to get in somewhere, at a minimum, that the rate and magnitude of change may be so great that many ecosystems and species of wildlife may not be able to adapt. This should probably be earlier rather than later (i.e.on the first page?, first para?).
Thank Goodness for the Industrial Revolution
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